You will move to a city for work.You know some people who live there.
Tell them for help finding accommodation
Tell them where you would like to live
Tell them the type of place you are looking for.
Dear Faith,
How are you and the family? Thank you for hosting me over Christmas, I must say the experience is really out of this world. The pictures keeps the memories vivid and am glad I accepted your invitation. I am writing to inform you I just got a job with Cadbury Nigeria and I have been posted to lagos state effective immediately.
I will appreciate if you can help in securing accommodation around surulere area since my office is located at the axis. A room mini flat with a balcony and parking space inside an estate is my choice of place for leaving. Preferably, not above N250,000 per annum.
Because, surulere is central to town and easy to navigate other parts of lagos. I can also avoid traffic and reduce my stress levels if am living close to working area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Faith, How are you and the family? Thank you fo...
^^^
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'keep'.
Suggestion: keep
... really out of this world. The pictures keeps the memories vivid and am glad I accept...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to lagos state effective immediately. I will appreciate if you can help in sec...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... traffic and reduce my stress levels if am living close to working area.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54609929078 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51694124079 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730496453901 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2086581578 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192347844087 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661811695395 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056769733453 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110632100949 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593598408271 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.