It is generally accepted that smoking causes the deaths of large number of people. In order to address this problem governments should bans smoking in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
smoking is the curse of the society. it is responsible for spreading numerous disease in human body which can kill them. government should strictly ban the use of cigarette in crowd place. this essay will explain why government authorities have need to take this action and explain hazardous impact of cigarette in people s life.
There are many reasons for banning smoking in public places. First of all, smoke of cigarette is very harmful for non-smoker who stand near to smoker cause of this they can face same disease who is faced by smoker such as lung disease, cancer, heart disease, stroke and diabetes. The death rate is high cause of this illness specially in America where 16million people death. so nation have make some dut
ies for saving of citizen . Secondly, woman feel more struggle than man especially for pregnant lady who cannot take breath in emissions smoke as well as cigarette smoke danger for their children. if country would ban it than people can take breath in fresh air.
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government can ban all public place for instance bus stand, railway station, school, university and so on, where people can use cigarette. government should take heavy amount of money and prison punishment for that person who break the law. For example, last year Indian government have banned the use of smoking in crowd place and every person can complain against that person who use cigarette.
In the conclusion, if government create this law, it will become the blessing of today generation. In my opinion, every country should apply this law in this nation for protecting their upcoming generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99256505576 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4269504821 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1329639875 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198375797862 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811887045272 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560727268136 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115726768697 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342821506847 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.