Extreme sports, the most liked kinds of sports, have been a subject of many debates whether they should be banned or granted freedom. Although many sportmans seeking excitement place a high value in this despite the fact that they are fully aware of the danger of being killed in the process, they are still determined to make it even if it costs their life. I strongly believe government should limit popularity on such aggressive sports and replace them with the ones that are safer and serve them well.
On the one hand, allowing extreme sports is hazardous to the well being of athletes. So it has been believed that government should take drastic action in protecting individuals from themselves. Most of these people being from a disadvantaged background choose to escape from either stress, the pressure imposed by life or monotony of every day living. Dangerous sports like rugby, skydiving, parachute jumping and boxing cause severe injuries and in some cases lead to death. For instance, to eliminate one another, boxers continue fighting that results in getting a concussion or being badly wounded. Moreover, hosting such events needs a huge amount of money, the money that would be better spent on education and school. Extreme sports athletes put their life in jeopardy in return for being paid a huge sum of money while they can think about other respectable professions without experiencing such pain.
On the other hand, there are people coming up with the idea of choice. They believe every individual are to be entitled the liberty to choose her own path whether it is well protected or not. As it has been believed that government have to secure them with highly developed gears or equipments rather than confine their freedom, not to mention that government are required to fund them with top insurance and medical care.
Overall, it seems to me that forbidding of such risky sports would be highly beneficial to their health, however it may oppose to democracy. Safety of people in society is the first and foremost priority of any democratic society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99135446686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50331939189 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590778097983 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9451023163 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23672876454 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073147843856 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428171021463 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134812533488 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408196527773 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.