You have lost something at the airport and a staff member helped you to find your belonging. Write a letter to the airport authority and tell them about that person, including:
- What did you lose?
- How did that person help you?
- Suggest the way of appreciation for that person.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your helping to find my lost cellphone.
I am Mari Smith one of the passenger of the flight number A653 from Mashhad to Tehran on 21th of April 2013. Unfortunately, at Mehrabad airport, I realized my suitcase was not arrived and it was missing by a mistake. Therefore, I went to missing part and someone who name was John Midelton asked me some question about my suitcase and completed a missing form for me. He called to another airport’s part include Mashhad Airport and tried to found my bag.
After a few hours he succeed to found my suitcase, it was in Esfahan. He made a promise to me that my bag would be there just before midnight. Thanks to him, my suticase arrived as his promisse.
I am very grateful, if you mention this good behavior of john Midelton on his file and give him some gift for his working.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
M. Minoo.
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someone who name was John Midelton
someone whose name was John Midelton
and tried to found my bag.
and tried to find my bag.
Sentence: After a few hours he succeed to found my suitcase, it was in Esfahan.
Description: The fragment he succeed to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace succeed with verb, past tense
Description: The word found is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to found
Sentence: Thanks to him, my suticase arrived as his promisse.
Error: promisse Suggestion: promise
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 169 200
No. of Characters: 724 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.284 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.396 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.665 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.647 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.255 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4