Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
teachers are mainly part of society structers. In my view, teacher were more valued nowadays rather than in the past.
First, education is more accessable rather than before. The governmets take care about education, and spend plenty budget in education. Main part of education are teachers, and significant of this budget spend for them. According to the research which was conducted by one of the most reputable universities of my country a teacher have more revenue rather than other jobs. A prime example from my own experience on this point is my neighbour John who is a teacher. johalfn has welfare in whole life. he does not concern about house and daily expentuers. he has a very good house. he go to trip with his familly every weekend. so, the government take care about teacher. In the past, it wan not easy for every one to study, therefore, they weren't as important as are nowadays.
Second, The parents loves teacher because the teacher learn many thing to their children. furthermore, some other factors should be taken into account when talking about a teacher. teachers have a lovely character, so everyone loves them. As I said, a little group of people could study in the past, therefore, more less people know teachers to appreciated them. Altough there is still a great deal of heated debates about appreciated teachers. If we care about teachers, we will garauntte healthful society. In the past, people leave in clony and they were not concern about whole society. however, it is more important to care about teacher this days.
teacher is most important part of educations. they teach children, and children will construct society when they growup. The governmets know this and make them walfare. The parents and other people care about teachers. nowadays, every one knows this important rather than before.
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- TOEFL TPO 48 - Integrated Writing Task 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Teachers
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...y expentuers. he has a very good house. he go to trip with his familly every weeke...
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Suggestion: goes
...xpentuers. he has a very good house. he go to trip with his familly every weekend....
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Suggestion: So
...to trip with his familly every weekend. so, the government take care about teacher...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wans'?
Suggestion: wans
...ake care about teacher. In the past, it wan not easy for every one to study, theref...
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Suggestion: weren't
...for every one to study, therefore, they werent as important as are nowadays. Second...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...loves teacher because the teacher learn many thing to their children. furthermore, some ot...
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Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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...ple could study in the past, therefore, more less people know teachers to appreciated the...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ould study in the past, therefore, more less people know teachers to appreciated the...
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...is more important to care about teacher this days. teacher is most important part...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, talking about, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02287581699 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51845467537 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9861810785 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1153846154 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197014925986 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551905890291 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549558391924 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151500503767 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620703689545 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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