You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say
- What was the accident?
- When did it happen?
- Suggest how the damage can be fixed.
Dear Alan,
I hope this letter finds you well. It is to inform you, while I was staying at your house. One of your item has been damaged. However, I have already asked an interior designer to fix it. Moreover, this problem was caused due my negligence.
Let me explain you in detail. As you are aware, that we had already planned barbecue at your place, but unfortunately, you had to go out of town and we decided to go on with the plan. Party was going well and we had cooked some great food. However, while serving the drinks, drink fell onto wooden floor and have caused a bit of damage.
Moreover, I have this friend, who is an interior designer and have already shown him the floor. He has already started working and will fix it in few days. So, as it was caused by my negligence, therefore, it is requested, that I would like to pay for damage caused and apologies for the nuisance caused.
Yours Sincerely
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alan, I hope this letter finds you well. It is...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4161849711 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3430876655 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3419239775 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7692307692 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204503781539 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074320930139 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841356153472 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132102198846 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555865221207 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.