The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads ( margarine , low fat and reduced spreads and butter) which were consumed over 26 years from 1981 to 2007 . Units are measured in grams
Overall, the consumption of margarine and butter decreased over the period given , while for low fat and reduced spreads , it rose . At the start of the period , butter was the most popular spread , which was replaced by margarine from 1991 to 2001 , and following that low fat and reduced spreads became the most widely used spread in the final years
With regards to the amount of butter used , it began at around 140 grams and then peaked at 160 grams in 1986 before falling dramatically to about 50 grams in the last year. Likewise, approximately 90 grams of margarine was eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40 grams in 2007
On the other hand , the consumption of a low fats and reduced spreads only started in 1996 at about 10 grams . This figure , which reached a high of just over 80 grams 5 years later , fell slightly in the final years to approximately 70 grams in 2007
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tes the amount of three kinds of spreads margarine , low fat and reduced spreads ...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...unt of three kinds of spreads margarine , low fat and reduced spreads and butter ...
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...consumed over 26 years from 1981 to 2007 . Units are measured in grams Overall, t...
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...d butter decreased over the period given , while for low fat and reduced spreads ,...
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... , while for low fat and reduced spreads , it rose . At the start of the period , ...
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... replaced by margarine from 1991 to 2001 , and following that low fat and reduced ...
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...st widely used spread in the final years With regards to the amount of butter use...
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...ith regards to the amount of butter used , it began at around 140 grams and then p...
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...w of 40 grams in 2007 On the other hand , the consumption of a low fats and reduc...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ow fats and reduced spreads only started in 1996 at about 10 grams . This figure ...
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... in 1996 at about 10 grams . This figure , which reached a high of just over 80 gr...
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...high of just over 80 grams 5 years later , fell slightly in the final years to app...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... years to approximately 70 grams in 2007
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, likewise, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58910891089 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41303473128 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509900990099 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0801766931 43.030603864 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.4 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183349734297 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120711642216 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863661264411 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134617979452 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901442297312 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.26 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.