The pie charts compare the distribution for the ages of the demographic of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the projection for 2050.
In 2000, just over half of the population of Yemen aged 14 or below, while most of the Italian (61.6%) aged from 15 to 59 years old, and only 14.3% of Italian aged below 15. Residents aged over 60 years accounted for 24.1% in Italy, but only 3.6% of the population in Yemen.
By 2050, the proportion of children in both nations is predicted to drop. Yemen, in particular, is expected to decrease about 13% of proportion. Meanwhile, the number of elderly in both countries is expected to increase, with 2.1% in Yemen and a considerable increase of 12.1% in Italy. Finally, it is anticipated that the proportion of 15-59 years will grew by 11% in Yemen, while a drop of 15% in Italy.
In general, it is apparent that the proportion of elderly over 60 years for Italy was much more than that of Yemen, and the same situation is predicted for 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'grow'
Suggestion: grow
...that the proportion of 15-59 years will grew by 11% in Yemen, while a drop of 15% in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, while, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57954545455 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61333990414 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1283361405 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204683897496 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09479361995 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659761599114 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14141149085 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617074763879 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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