Human beings, by nature, crave for being successful in any aspects of their lives, especially in their career. Hence, the answer to the following question has become of utmost importance: What is the main key to success in a job? There might be a debate whether being able to relate to other people is more important or studying hard in the university. Although in order to be a successful person it is inevitably necessary to be knowledgable, I believe having appropriate ability to connect and communicate with others is more significant because success is not only about having knowledge and it is...
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Sentence: Although in order to be a successful person it is inevitably necessary to be knowledgable, I believe having appropriate ability to connect and communicate with others is more significant because success is not only about having knowledge and it is highly to other people.
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Sentence: He is such a well-educated and knowledgable person in my country.
Error: well-educated Suggestion: well educated
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Sentence: In fact, he is the best in his field of sciense and career.
Error: sciense Suggestion: science
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 430 350
No. of Characters: 2034 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.554 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.73 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.632 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.146 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.477 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5