Dear Ms Mary
I feel sorry about your letter and I am writing to you to express my sincere apologies.
That night I was celebrating my birthday with my friends and my relatives and since I have not given a party for my birthday or any other grand occasions in the past 8 years, I had organised a grand party this year. All of us were in great joy, so we played loud music and did some dance movements. Probably, that would have caused a great sound, disturbing your sleep.
I really feel sorry about that, we were not aware that it will create such a deal of noise. Kindly accept my sincere apology as my intention was not to trouble my neighbours by doing such activities.
I will also ensure that you will not get any such trouble in future. From now onwards I will organize the part in the neighbourhood hotel or restaurant, away from home, thereby not create any inconvenience to my neighbours.
I hope you will accept my apologies.
Yours sincerely
Akil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that you will not get any such trouble in future. From now onwards I will organize the p...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... accept my apologies. Yours sincerely Akil
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58522727273 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56807496761 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3269162806 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181901673885 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916897291974 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774620839626 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11549206919 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834902165826 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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