Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging having reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.
That what extent do you agree or disagree?
Email and text massage make people hard to meet their relative and friends. This raise negative points for their social life. I agree electronic message could help human activity. While this are true, I believe there are some disagree opinions.
A several years ago, people communicated by letter or phone cable when there my friends are far, usually they did not enough time to reply message’s or pick up the phone’s friend all the time it is not make good relationship. They used to chat and meet when they had a lot of time. Communication with phone cable or letter has some constraints for example people must have special time to reply and it is so complicated.
Nowadays, email and SMS has helped in the communication. For instance, people asked something to friend and they has not enough time, there could one of feature mobile phone it is very simple, other example people keep chatting with best friend. Although there are in other different country and than email and SMS are able to trade activities like an online shop. People can reply electronic message when still worked or busy time and it make communications are not interrupted.
I think it is also difficult to agree that modern many people less activity social, in my experience, the amount people meet each other has increased. Electronic massage allows people an appointment. They were useful in communications long distance without disturbed bustle. But people should be wise using electronic message that not create individual properties.
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