do you agree or disagree that some families offering their kids money when they get high score

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...nions whether the parents shall offer to their kids a tip when they get high ...
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...parents shall offer to their kids a tip when they get high score or they do...
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...s shall offer to their kids a tip when they get high score or they dont hav...
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...l offer to their kids a tip when they get high score or they dont have to d...
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...er to their kids a tip when they get high score or they dont have to do th...
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... their kids a tip when they get high score or they dont have to do this pr...
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...s a tip when they get high score or they dont have to do this practice , i...
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... when they get high score or they dont have to do this practice , in my poin...
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...et high score or they dont have to do this practice , in my point of view I...
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...gh score or they dont have to do this practice , in my point of view I belie...
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...or they dont have to do this practice , in my point of view I believe that g...
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...e to do this practice , in my point of view I believe that giving the childre...
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...o this practice , in my point of view I believe that giving the children boun...
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...e , in my point of view I believe that giving the children bounce when they mak...
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...ren bounce when they make excellent mark is a good idea owing to a number of r...
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...bounce when they make excellent mark is a good idea owing to a number of ratio...
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...excellent mark is a good idea owing to a number of rational reasons which i wi...
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...k is a good idea owing to a number of rational reasons which i will explain t...
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...to a number of rational reasons which i will explain them in this statement : ...
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...number of rational reasons which i will explain them in this statement : ...
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...i will explain them in this statement : First offering our kids some money when...
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... First offering our kids some money when they do high score will encourag...
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... offering our kids some money when they do high score will encourage them stu...
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...ids some money when they do high score will encourage them study more and be...
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...me money when they do high score will encourage them study more and become b...
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...hey do high score will encourage them study more and become better in their c...
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...re will encourage them study more and become better in their class because th...
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...nd become better in their class because they will be very motivated to study and...
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...they will be very motivated to study and get some rewards Second this ...
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...will be very motivated to study and get some rewards Second this kind ...
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...otivated to study and get some rewards Second this kind of practice will let ...
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...y and get some rewards Second this kind of practice will let the kids...
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...s Second this kind of practice will let the kids feel that we appreciat...
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... accomplishment and how important it for us and for them as well when offer gift...
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...ishment and how important it for us and for them as well when offer gift for our...
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...ids as reward for their good result will teach them that we should always apprec...
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... their good result will teach them that we should always appreciate the valuable...
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...ys appreciate the valuable achievement. in addition that offer a bounce to our k...
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...appreciate the valuable achievement. in addition that offer a bounce to our kid...
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...reciate the valuable achievement. in addition that offer a bounce to our kids will ma...
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...a bounce to our kids will make them like their study more Third it alway...
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...ds will make them like their study more Third it always good that we offer ...
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...study more Third it always good that we offer a gift or some funds to ...
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... it always good that we offer a gift or some funds to kids to encourage them i...
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... that we offer a gift or some funds to kids to encourage them instead of used...
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...r some funds to kids to encourage them instead of used other ways like enforc...
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...s to kids to encourage them instead of used other ways like enforce them to ...
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...ourage them instead of used other ways like enforce them to study or punish...
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...d of used other ways like enforce them to study or punish them some studies...
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... used other ways like enforce them to study or punish them some studies ens...
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...other ways like enforce them to study or punish them some studies ensured th...
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...r ways like enforce them to study or punish them some studies ensured that p...
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...enforce them to study or punish them some studies ensured that put our kids o...
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...ore respect or promising them with money to motivate them to study hard bring a...
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...em with money to motivate them to study hard bring a better result than other ...
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...h money to motivate them to study hard bring a better result than other method...
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...em to study hard bring a better result than other methods . to sum up c...
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...ring a better result than other methods . to sum up considering the point...
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...a better result than other methods . to sum up considering the points above ...
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...ter result than other methods . to sum up considering the points above t...
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...t than other methods . to sum up considering the points above that offer...
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... to sum up considering the points above that offer money to the kids will hel...
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...considering the points above that offer money to the kids will help to make ...
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...ring the points above that offer money to the kids will help to make the kid...
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... the points above that offer money to the kids will help to make the kids lo...
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...hat offer money to the kids will help to make the kids love their work and en...
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...offer money to the kids will help to make the kids love their work and encour...
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...ds love their work and encourage them to study more and gain better score theref...
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... their work and encourage them to study more and gain better score therefore I s...
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...d gain better score therefore I strongly agree with the statement.
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...r score therefore I strongly agree with the statement.
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...re therefore I strongly agree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, in addition, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45627376426 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14804805908 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494296577947 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.1344086022 432% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 261.649893305 48.9658058833 534% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 390.666666667 100.406767564 389% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.6666666667 20.6045352989 425% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 5.45110844103 477% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 72.0 5.5376344086 1300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324344869507 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226713684108 0.076458572812 297% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098911592544 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199468190086 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105070343299 0.0645574589148 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.4 11.7677419355 369% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 58.1214874552 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 10.1575268817 344% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 10.002688172 520% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.0537634409 366% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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