Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter find you in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to thankyou for the wonderful pictures and the splendid holidays I spent with you guys last month. it was an alluring experience as it was my first overseas trip. I wanted to thank Jane personally for her hospitality and for the superb photographs she has taken. Whenever I look at these pictures I relinquish the memorable trip I had with you guys.
At the outset, I wanted to write to you guys earlier but when I reached India I got so busy with my daily schedule. To elucidate I had to finish pending projects at my office which were at a critical handover stage with the clients and needed my immediate attention.
Why don't you guys come to India to spend summer vacation starting next month?. We can explore a lot of tourist destinations here and I am sure you will find it interesting. Apart from a vacation, it will also be a great opportunity to endure various facades of a different culture.
I look forward to your soonest response.
Yours loving
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mark, Hope this letter find you in the pink of...
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...idays I spent with you guys last month. it was an alluring experience as it was my...
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...r the superb photographs she has taken. Whenever I look at these pictures I relinquish t...
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... guys earlier but when I reached India I got so busy with my daily schedule. To e...
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...ents and needed my immediate attention. Why dont you guys come to India to spend...
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...needed my immediate attention. Why dont you guys come to India to spend summer ...
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Suggestion:
...to your soonest response. Yours loving Tim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59685863874 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62058490721 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1125175527 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289311531025 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992419536016 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731252968306 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141292143974 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100431493753 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.