Are Human really a superior creature?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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When a person is born he get in to the race named 'Life&apos...
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When a person is born he get in to the race named 'Life' ....
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...et in to the race named 'Life' . This race do not stop till the death of...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ace do not stop till the death of person . Between this race a person do various t...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...rson do various task for getting success . Now a days, over development of techn...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...n do various task for getting success . Now a days, over development of technology is le...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... various task for getting success . Now a days, over development of technology is le...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s task for getting success . Now a days, over development of technology is leadin...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...oward the end of Empathy and cooperation . Every person in this world think of the...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...person in this world think of themselves . Nobody tries to help other . Humanity i...
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Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... themselves . Nobody tries to help other . Humanity is disappearing day by day. T...
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Line 1, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...h he/she is transforming in to a monster . ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...she is transforming in to a monster . Now science have given us almost everyth...
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Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... science have given us almost everything . We all are over dependant upon todays g...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ll are over dependant upon todays gadget . To clarify it, We can also take an exam...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...can also take an example of mobile phone , Mobile phones have became a basic requi...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...le of mobile phone , Mobile phones have became a basic requirement of person but becau...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...on of mobiles birds are dying day by day . But Human dont care for the birds . the...
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Suggestion: don't
... birds are dying day by day . But Human dont care for the birds . they only think ab...
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Line 2, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... day . But Human dont care for the birds . they only think about their entertainme...
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Suggestion: They
...y . But Human dont care for the birds . they only think about their entertainment . ...
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Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hey only think about their entertainment . For being superior , One have to unders...
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Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...their entertainment . For being superior , One have to understand the problem of a...
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Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...derstand the problem of another creature . But Human are not taking any action tow...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tion toward the protection of animals. So, How can we say that Human are superi...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...nd care others can only be said superior . Now I want to conclude my points . Than...
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...erior . Now I want to conclude my points . Thank You . ...
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...I want to conclude my points . Thank You . ...
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...nt to conclude my points . Thank You .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68720379147 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67235350856 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8572272602 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.9444444444 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7222222222 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.944444444444 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184400055977 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574058144182 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957431881281 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145085286353 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819746245039 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.