Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays the most controversial topic is professionals such as doctors nurses, engineers and teachers should be paid more than the sportsman and entertainment characters. In world doctors and nurses treated as gods because they are the people who give another life to a patient. Furthermore entertainment personalities also act a great role for the society. However in further I will discuss both views before making a conclusion.
Firstly, in any emergency doctor and nurses are ready to serve their patient even in mid ...
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Nowadays the most controversial topic is professionals...
Nowadays the most controversial topic is that professionals...
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