The provided bar graph gives information about the number of accidents and injuries by five different modes of transportation in 2002. Numbers are given per 100 million PMT (passenger miles traveled).
Overall, it can be seen that the highest number of both accidents and injuries happened due to demand-response; however, the commuter-rail was the safest mode of transportation.
In terms of safety, commuter-rail was the most benign means of traveling with almost 20 cases of accident occurred and out of those only up to 15 got injured per 100 million PMT while demand-response was the most malignant mode of transport with above 250 units in accidents and roughly 75 % of them got injured.
Interestingly, the accident data for both light-rail and bus was the same (75 per 100 million PMT) while the injuries caused by bus accidents were a way higher than that of light-rail one’s (90% and 50% respectively). On the other hand, heavy-rail was the second safest option for traveling with 50 incidents and two-thirds of those had injury per 100 million PMT.
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- The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions 84
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- Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected.Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or e 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13142857143 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09141038716 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1232779386 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223778068817 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14421949798 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883126578366 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150685833886 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102121504316 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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