People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is true that people living urban lifestyle in major cities are plagued with numerous problems with their typical life. This essay will describe these problems and explain why should the government encourage citizens to move to the country side.
Nowadays the problems in large cities are endless. Transportation and medical facilities are heavily affected by massive migration. In almost every major cities are facing shortage of public transport which is forcing buses and trains to carry over it's capable limit which is not ideal from the safety point of view. Not only that people have to wait behind a long queue in order to ride into bus. This problem also forced some people to opt to use their private cars which is also responsible for traffic congestion. Apart from that all the hospitals are running out of supplies and people have to stay on the floor because they are running out of beds. Dhaka can be an adequate example of excessive urban migration, the roads are clogged with heavy traffic along with heavy traffic.
In my point of view, the government should convince people to move to small towns. This would certainly lift the pressure of all the public facilities like hospitals and transports. Fewer people would travel by buses and trains which would eventually reduce traffic congestion. Hospitals would not have to deal with overwhelming patients. Beside this, more people living in country side means decentralization of development. At the moment only big cities are developed leaving small town underdeveloped. If people started to live in villages then to urbanization would happen automatically. This would also tempt people not to move to mega cities. Government would never run out of problems to solve in overpopulated cities rather they should try to shift the population to countryside.
In conclusion, overpopulated city is a major problem in the world, without moderation of population between city and countryside there is no way that the problem can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15902140673 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72491993948 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7202496084 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332342590115 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100153465883 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773643037191 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215143163523 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814335959213 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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