The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world’s cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation?
Since the Industrial Revolution, people across the globe have been attracted to the city from the countryside. Although this movement has brought benefits for both the cities and its inhabitants, it has also brought many problems. The causes and solutions lies in understanding what pushes people away from the countryside and pulls them to the city.
The biggest attraction is the potential of a better salary and position than they already have, whereas there is a lack of prospects if they stay. It can also be beneficial for their children who would have access to a wider choice of schools and...
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- The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world’s cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation? 88
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