Dear Sir,
My name is Sarah Musharraf, I live in United Street, Karachi. I have some complaint about my area there are huge amount of trashes in my street.
In couples of months ago, I noted that, the facilities of cleaning is quite complicated in my area and the reason is that due to government workers strike. I have complaint many time but unfortunately, there are no response.
Additionally, I would like to mention here, the condition of my area is too bad.Trashes are not collecting by garbage collector, dusbtin has not spaced to throw the waste. Furthermore, the whole area has immensed look. Old people have already suffered different kind of diseases. They have oxygen issue just because of untidy envoirnment. Even drinking water has been vitated and parents are worried to their children health.
I requested to you, kindly take some action and try to improve our street position as soon as possible. Even I will suggest you, appoint other area cleaner in to our street just because of healthy environment.
Waiting for your immediately response.
Yours Faithfully,
Heena.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et, Karachi. I have some complaint about my area there are huge amount of trashes...
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Suggestion: amounts
...complaint about my area there are huge amount of trashes in my street. In couples ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...rnment workers strike. I have complaint many time but unfortunately, there are no respons...
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Suggestion:
...itionally, I would like to mention here, the condition of my area is too bad.Tras...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Trashes
...e, the condition of my area is too bad.Trashes are not collecting by garbage collector...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11049723757 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78492499177 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3365462898 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1538461538 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963605082866 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418738645135 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647782713905 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549271218548 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578523427064 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.