Many magazines have pictures of famous people on holiday or with their families.
Is it acceptable for famous people to have less privacy than other people?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Most of the branded magazines will have the photographs of celebrates. These points are debated for its negative as well as positive views. This essay will explain about the factors that will lead to the above issues.
Moreover, the celebrities are the center of attraction wherever they belong to. Famous people can be a role model in the society. For example, Indian cricket captain's interview about his latest visit to Australia along with his family, will add an attraction to the people and they want to know about him. As a result, the public buy the magazine with enthusiasm and this will increase circulation of the magazine.
Nonetheless, when we give more important to celebrities, the common people may not get priority though they may have participated in some other sports, the magazines will give less important to them. As a result, the upcoming talents not introduced to the society.
On the other hand, the famous people did not have privacy even they wanted to have. Nowadays, the social media is giving more important to those type of news. Hence the important news are ignoring by the people.
In my opinion, the famous people also should be treated as normal people. They also should have the privacy lead their life. The famous people are admired by our young generation. These people are the real examples for the society. Instead of using them for circulation of the magazine, their articles through this they can share their views to the society. This may make a tremendous change in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...g more important to those type of news. Hence the important news are ignoring by the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94573643411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48289624261 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8476071266 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8888888889 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290068722945 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910932203437 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842570865958 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15683462691 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588615258018 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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