In the big cities with dense of the inhabitant, the problem about house waste emerges that this garbage shall be re-used to minimize the pollution to the environment. However, there are some doubts among people whether the recycling of garbage shall be compelled by the government with their laws or it isn’t preferable with management.
To begin with, the government have the right to govern the country. They can publish the ordinance which gives information to the public to recycle their waste. For example, today, in America, many supermarkets aren’t permitted to use a plastic bag to bring the goods and the government will give some punish when people strive to break the rule. But the masses can reuse their last plastic bag or degradable bag as the substitution. This is why the law can initiate the people to open-mind about recycling.
On the other hand, there are several alternatives to manage the waste. First of all, the producer who creates the goods shall be labeled the product while it is reusable or not. By known this sign/ warn, the community will know how to differentiate it. Second, the information about the waste recycling can socialize in the education sector. For example, the school can introduce the subject about the environment and how to protect it. This preference will give the new generation to be responsible and care about their waste.
In conclusion, the law is needed to drive the people obedience about recycle of their waste. But it isn’t the main way, there are some strategies by socialization the advantage of reuse the waste.
- The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the 73
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- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem? 67
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03396226415 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72853935656 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0379927032 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185403763821 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652640890064 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629073561108 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12734304258 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519645114484 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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