In the big cities with dense of the inhabitant, the problem about house waste emerges that this garbage shall be re-used to minimize the pollution to the environment. However, there are some doubts among people whether the recycling of garbage shall be compelled by the government with their laws or it isn’t preferable with management.
To begin with, the government have the right to govern the country. They can publish the ordinance which gives information to the public to recycle their waste. For example, today, in America, many supermarkets aren’t permitted to use a plastic bag to bring the goods and the government will give some punish when people strive to break the rule. But the masses can reuse their last plastic bag or degradable bag as the substitution. This is why the law can initiate the people to open-mind about recycling. If laws about recycling were passed, it would force people to think carefully before throwing things out with the garbage.
On the other hand, there are several alternatives to manage the waste. First of all, the producer who creates the goods shall be labeled the product while it is reusable or not. By known this sign/ warn, the community will know how to differentiate it. Second, the information about the waste recycling can socialize in the education sector. For example, the school can introduce the subject about the environment and how to protect it. This preference will give the new generation to be responsible and care about their waste.
In conclusion, the law is needed to drive the people obedience about recycle of their waste. But it isn’t the main way, there are some strategies by socialization the advantage of reuse the waste.
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 67
- Some people think sport is important to society. Other, however, feel it is nothing more than leisure activity. Discuss both views and give opinion. 84
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that paying tax is their only duty while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards society Discuss both view and give your opinion 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04210526316 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69371325589 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0683490326 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203684878888 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700011045422 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636128267713 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136817154784 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591181370586 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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