You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, I had ordered a cricket kit, which was suppose to be delivered by a local courier company latest by yesterday; dated 25th January, 2019. however, it hasn't been delivered yet. As, it is very crucial, because it is needed for upcoming matches.
Let me explain you in detail. It is apprised that, an important tournament is scheduled to start from tomorrow and I have a major responsibility in my team. Moreover, we were supposed to practice with the items, which were to be delivered yesterday. I had opted for this kit due to the faster delivery and availability of items in same city. Also, on numerous occasions, I have tried to track the items, but I have been misinformed by your representatives.
Furthermore, it seems like this situation has occurred due to non professional attitude of staff and has turned out to become a nuisance for me. Therefore, it is requested to kindly fix it and try to send the order, at your earliest. So, that these items are utilised in time.
Regards,
Alan Border
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. Recen...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... I had ordered a cricket kit, which was suppose to be delivered by a local courier comp...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... I had ordered a cricket kit, which was suppose to be delivered by a local courier comp...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'company the latest'.
Suggestion: company the latest
...pose to be delivered by a local courier company latest by yesterday; dated 25th January, 2019....
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'January 2019'.
Suggestion: January 2019
...company latest by yesterday; dated 25th January, 2019. however, it hasnt been delivered yet. ...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...by yesterday; dated 25th January, 2019. however, it hasnt been delivered yet. As, it is...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...; dated 25th January, 2019. however, it hasnt been delivered yet. As, it is very cruc...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ause it is needed for upcoming matches. Let me explain you in detail. It is appr...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ry to send the order, at your earliest. So, that these items are utilised in time. R...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...items are utilised in time. Regards, Alan Border
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79459459459 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84729954207 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686486486486 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4164875839 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208859064308 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589324825968 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417493432903 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127812216989 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543992248223 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.