Based on my assessment, car usage is growing every moment. So, I disagree with the mentioned statement; for several reasons. First, by comparison of today and 20 years ago, easily we can say that the car usage is increased. For example, 20 years ago, there was the chance that only one car was coming to our village quarterly. But these days, the street is full of car traffic and every moment the car is passing us. The second reason is that everyone tries to reach their destination sooner and avoid wasting their time walking to their job or meeting. So, everyone buys a car as soon as they afford. Now in most of the family, one person has a car. 20 years later everyone in a family would have a car. So the car usage increase. The third reason is that it is an easy driving transport device. Although in some countries there is a limit on age of the drivers, everyone who meet the law requirements they start using a car. Finally, I disagree with the statement.
- People spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do.Do you agree or disagree with the above statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them 60
- TPO 35 :Agree/Disagree: In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 1977.66487455 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43258426966 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39813950737 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1210796497 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6923076923 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153771740377 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557892626324 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424195745448 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153771740377 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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