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Explain the process below of hydro-electric power generation.
This picture explains the process of hydro-electric power generation. This is generated by using electricity generators to extract energy from moving water. This is process of changing the kinetic energy of flowing water in an artificial dam into electrical power that we can use for.
These process begins from the sun that evaporated the sea water became cloud. Coming immediately after the cloud became raining, the water is gathered in artificial dam that is used to hold the water and create pressure. Furthermore, this reservoir has function to make gravitational potential energy. This ener...
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All process above need correlation between water resources and artificial generator by renewable process that it is taken nothing away from the environment and therefore nothing needs to be replenished. The water stays in the water cycle and can keep producing energy endlessly.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 265 200
No. of Characters: 1372 1000
No. of Different Words: 133 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.177 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.761 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.665 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4