It is obvious that these days people tend to live in modern cities rather than living in suburban areas or villages like their ancestor did. In my view, living in large areas would certainly beneficial but there will also be some drawbacks.
The clear advantage of this is that it would enable greater job opportunities. In other words, if you live in an industrial and technological region, not only have more options to work in big and well-known places but also will experience and gain unique life skills.
Another reason that being a resident of a large city would be advantageous is that it would present many advanced health care services which the lack of it will bring a real difficulty. Therefore you are allowed to choose among a number of them with easy access.
On the other hand, there are main disadvantages that probably occurs when you live in large cities. Firstly, it would mean that most of the time air is polluted and the streets are clogged. There were only noise and smoke of the transportation system and factories. Secondly, living in modern areas are more complicated than being in villages because people all the time are in hurry. This would cause an unhappy life and even more crime.
In conclusion, while there are negative points to live in big and modern areas, too much would be lost as a result. So promoting a healthy lifestyle and safe regions should be prioritized to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much advanced health', 'a good deal of advanced health'.
Suggestion: much advanced health; a good deal of advanced health
...e advantageous is that it would present many advanced health care services which the lack of it will...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ack of it will bring a real difficulty. Therefore you are allowed to choose among a numbe...
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Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... world heritage for future generations.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82213438735 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57788730866 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5288824074 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8461538462 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227376536101 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770934482062 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709944217995 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123028937255 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860882862303 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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