In this advanced era, people are constantly looking for ways to run away from hustle and bustle of the city and what is better than a trip even a brief one. Travel agencies offer some comforting services to people who desire to take a trip in a foreign country, though I myself prefer to going on my own.
Annually a tremendous amount of money flows all around the globe just in summer albeit some countries have been more prosperous than others. Tourism and attracting travelers from all over the world has been a lucrative income for countries and workers in this in industry say tour guides. Main reason for people travelling with tour guides and leaders is that they stay in their comfort zones and some one else has the responsibility for transportation, accommodation, and more importantly the safety. Such services although costy and unnecessary frequently is the preferred option for people but, not for me!
Thanks to technology and the internet, nowadays everything has become possible and eased. People most of the times claim that travelling with ourselves has disadvantages like getting lost, not having enough knowledge regarding the sightseeing but in contrary it is just about a simple GOOGLE search and then as the American say Bob is your uncle(!). Using different applications for transport both with public transportation and even with taxies or map applications concerning locating themselves or translating apps for countries with different native language nowadays are prevail and handy for virtually every one.
Travelling with tour guides is mostly accompanied with group travelling which has some irritating circumstances and sometimes potential contradictions may come out. Being have to wait for every single person in tour or trying to keep up with others costs us with losing our freedom which can ruin the joy of the trip. For instance, personaly saying when I go on a trip my main goal is to know about the culture, history and traditions of that place and nothing more than historical monuments can not possibly amaze me but some prefer to shop and believe that these places are just some ridiculous buildings. Additionally, I always prefer jungle to beach but it is otherwise for my sister or parents thus, witnessing the difference between indivituals even in family, travelling by myself or friends that I have same interests as I have is my dominant choice.
Consequently, varieties of lifestyles and interests and lack of economically cost effectiveness, freedom and last but no least the comfort brings me to this conclusion that travelling alone is my way of relaxing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
...eign country, though I myself prefer to going on my own. Annually a tremendous amoun...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...at they stay in their comfort zones and some one else has the responsibility for transpo...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevailed'.
Suggestion: prevailed
... different native language nowadays are prevail and handy for virtually every one. Tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10514018692 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89542736925 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5333682014 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.076923077 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9230769231 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10836399708 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438005663804 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394685857945 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060019801442 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206013160797 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 11.7677419355 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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