living on astroids
The reading states that sending human to astroide is a good idea to make a colony and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that these ideas are not practical and refutes each of the author's reason.
First, the reading states that because astroides have low gravirty, and they are small so, this low gravity would make taking off and landing easier. Nevertheless the professor explains that these low gravity would cause astronauts to lose their muscle, and it would lead to a decrease in bone density, so astronauts would suffer in this situation.
Second, the reading states that people can reach many valueable element such as platinum. The professor explain that the cost of the trip is high, and it decrease the benefit of finding these elements.
Third, the reading claims that astroides are more reachable than other planets because spacecrafts need less for the trip back to Earth. The professor refutes this point, and explains that some astroides are close to Earth now, but they are moving away, to that getting back from astroides would be a challenge.,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd refutes each of the authors reason. First, the reading states that beca...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...uld make taking off and landing easier. Nevertheless the professor explains that these low g...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...auts would suffer in this situation. Second, the reading states that people c...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'explains'.
Suggestion: explains
...element such as platinum. The professor explain that the cost of the trip is high, and ...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...at the cost of the trip is high, and it decrease the benefit of finding these elements. ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...benefit of finding these elements. Third, the reading claims that astroides...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, nevertheless, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 182.0 270.72406181 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38585575681 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133785092946 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614338894995 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667256609234 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799123148397 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695385676282 0.0443174109184 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.