Communication is a sort of connection between two people as well as two familes. I personally agree with this statement nowadays, communication system is most advance and people try to use short cut. So, they avoid to write letters to their love ones.
At begin with, in this century most of the people are busy to their jobs, goals and work. They have no time to longer way of communication. They wants short cut easier and simple tips and techniques.Furthermore, now technology is too much advance and people have used different mode of channel to connect with their families, friends and relative in the form of whatsapp, Facebook, Skype and many medium channel. It is quick way service.
On the other hand, this source of medium communication helps you in business development, career growthing etc.You can easily findout tremendous amount of solution or outcome during the communication as compare to writing letter. Eventually just because of advancement medium social network is also improve. Peiple easily connect to each other just because of communication system. Inspite of, you can talk with native speakers about their traditions. It mounting your skills and General knowledge also.
Letter writing is a long term process. I do not deny it has no value but most of the people wants quick response, easy way to deliver their message to others.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, it is irrefutable that, unconsciously letter writing is avoiding just because of modern way of communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple as well as two familes. I personally agree with this statement nowadays, comm...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: SHORT_CUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcut'?
Suggestion: shortcut
...m is most advance and people try to use short cut. So, they avoid to write letters to the...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid writing'.
Suggestion: avoid writing
...d people try to use short cut. So, they avoid to write letters to their love ones. At begi...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...me to longer way of communication. They wants short cut easier and simple tips and te...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SHORT_CUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcut'?
Suggestion: shortcut
...longer way of communication. They wants short cut easier and simple tips and techniques.F...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...t easier and simple tips and techniques.Furthermore, now technology is too much advance and...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...iness development, career growthing etc.You can easily findout tremendous amount of...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...vancement medium social network is also improve. Peiple easily connect to each other ju...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nting your skills and General knowledge also. Letter writing is a long term proce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, sort of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.108 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00311571539 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.1827609362 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193354117312 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588335648217 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492850160933 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994144314899 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355432891688 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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