At first , in mine opinion increasing the number of human being who left their house is quite good for their future because a lot of families are move on searching for effortless life . In the context of Nepal 65% of land was covered by mountain so that their was some difficultly for develop and a person who lived in mountain are rapidly shift in developed area like cities. For example , according to research of mega collage of EPH population of villages are decrease lake of infrastructure . Futhermore ,
At first , in mine opinion increasing the number of human being who left their house is quite good for their future because a lot of families are move on searching for effortless life . In the context of nepal 65% of land was covered by mountain so that their was some difficultly for develop and a person who lived in mountain are rapidly shift in developed area like cities. For example , according to research of mega collage of eph population of villages are decrease lake of infrastructure . futhermore , At first , in mine opinion increasing the number of human being who left their house is quite good for their future because a lot of families are move on searching for effortless life . In the context of nepal 65% of land was covered by mountain so that their was some difficultly for develop and a person who lived in mountain are rapidly shift in developed area like cities. For example , according to research of mega collage of eph population of villages are decrease lake of infrastructure . futhermore , At first , in mine opinion increasing the number of human being who left their house is quite good for their future because a lot of families are move on searching for effortless life . In the context of nepal 65% of land was covered by mountain so that their was some difficultly for develop and a person who lived in mountain are rapidly shift in developed area like cities. For example , according to research of mega collage of eph population of villages are decrease lake of infrastructure . futhermore ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8122605364 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74421543186 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 176.041082164 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.256704980843 0.561755894193 46% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3126058413 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.555555556 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.695043555107 0.244688304435 284% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.336098508355 0.084324248473 399% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.304797040733 0.0667982634062 456% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.695043555107 0.151304729494 459% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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