Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology and has affected the relationships both negatively and positively. Give reasons for yous answers and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge or experience.
Now in the modern era, the way of individuals meeting with each other has changed because of increasing the technology. The technology is affected the relationships which is bad for human begins, but with some aspects it is good as well. I will shed light and discuss the both negative and positive ideas in upcoming paragraphs with suitable examples before appropriate conclusion.
On the negative side, nowadays technology increases day by day which have some negative effect on human beings. Furthermore, all person have our own mobile phone and use more and more in daily routine. For instance, i organize a small get together in-house and i invite my friends and relatives, when we celebrate the birthday all my friends are busy in mobiles phone no one can talk to each other and i am very upset to see these things. The technology affects the relationships because no one can interests to talk with each other because of internet, mobile phone and laptops etcetera.
On the positive sides, the technology have many benefits like with the help of internet person can talk with anyone who sit is far away from them. So with the help of technology there are many relations which can build with the help of technology.
To recapitulate, every things have positive and negative aspects, this essay is also contain both sides, but i opine that person can use the technology but in limits because the relationships is the very important for humans. Don't use anything limitless because it effects on life our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93725490196 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67777386929 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.292368348 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267970597753 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103900391155 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552426174681 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163292947452 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623741668069 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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