Write a letter to hotel manager praising a staff member
Explain the situation
What they did
What you want manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that how surprised I was knowing that a staff of your hotel saved my luggage from being stolen. I checked in last Saturday and I was in a hurry to attend a conference and as a result, I forgot my bag near the first reception.
Let me explain to you how he helped. One of your staff named Mike Mellott noticed someone running away with my belongings and observing that Mike immediately chased the stranger and protected my bag. Not only did he saved my bag, but also helped to arrest the suspect trying to steal it, by reporting it to the police. Furthermore, he protected a lot of precious items and important documents containing sensitive data from my business.
Could you please give me his contact details so I can personally thank him by sending a small token of appreciation? Moreover, I would be grateful if you can recognize him at your hotel so he feels motivated and consequently, other staff members will learn about his act of bravery and presence of mind.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[2]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knew'
Suggestion: knew
...er to let you know that how surprised I was knowing that a staff of your hotel saved my lug...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...er to let you know that how surprised I was knowing that a staff of your hotel saved my lug...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'someone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...taff named Mike Mellott noticed someone running away with my belongings and observing t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75257731959 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77068448735 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8030302161 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103776283636 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392445062508 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444109977956 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691217184113 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029832654603 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.