what are the pros and cons of watching television

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
these days, watching television is becoming a...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...seeing their favorite television shows. however, there are concerns about whether telev...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...n or if it is a negative impact to them.In this essay I will consider the advantag...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 368.0 1615.20841683 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 65.0 315.596192385 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66153846154 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.83941151443 4.20363070211 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91716000336 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.8 0.561755894193 142% => OK
syllable_count: 115.2 506.74238477 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1461183748 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200628023891 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133636346851 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508054595198 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200628023891 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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