The line graph illustrates changes of selling gold in Dubai during the year 2002 and it is measured in millions of Dirhams.
THe most obvious pieces of information are that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole the price of gold ends up just a little lower than it started at the beginning of the year.
In the first two months of year, the price of gold increased gradually and stood under 250 Dirhams but then it peaked in 350. Although gold saw the highest price on March, there was a significant decline during the next four months from 350 to about 100.
In the second half of the year, while Dubai's company experienced wild fluctuations from July to October, it reached the top in 200 on August. On November and December the price of gold remained stable merely under 200 Dirhams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear. In the first two months of year, the price of gold increased gradually an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43161683179 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5559347722 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216301256946 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105470275732 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794513646266 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134718704322 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087234402442 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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