In this day and age, whether this era is of daily inventions has become a debatable issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. Although, this time period is regarded as both positive and constructive by many individuals, there are a number of people hold an opposite view. I am inclined to strongly believe that the inventions of our timeline are quite beneficial for the nations since the increased human happiness index.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why I support the statement that this era is thriving with regular discoveries. First and foremost is that inventions increase the comfort factor among the population. Secondly, as comfort increases, human happiness levels will also increase. From my personal experience, I can comfortably say that people are happier than ever before. Consequently, it is quite conspicuous that this era is the best era to live.
However, there is no doubt that the inventions in this timeline can provide individuals with various negative outcomes. Despite this possibility, it is highly claimed that some inventions induce harm to people. By way of example, recent academic research conducted by Oxford University researchers in 2012 has shown that people starting to think that all the negativities of science as the bad apples of this era. Thus, it is quite obvious that inventions in this time period can be negative too.
To put it in a nutshell, while there are several persuasive arguments on both sides, my opinion confirms that this era is full of daily inventions. Not only due to the increased human happiness index, but also due to the comforts this era provides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05818181818 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77389483614 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0385281359 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281567608959 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097719379755 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659277327533 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177686292471 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242221560409 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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