Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To start with, poorer nations need to increase their living standard in constantly developed world. The most important fields need to be thrived are health, education and trade. It is clear that poor countries cannot improve their different areas by themselves. Some people think that wealth nations should be shared their wealth among poorer nations, while others think that each country should take care of their people. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion a closer examination reveals that countries, which have good resources, have to distribute their riches among poor countries ...
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 270 350
No. of Characters: 1378 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.054 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.104 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.458 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.305 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5