The given table gives information about the sales of four items (coffee, tea, pastries, sandwiches) by a coffee shop situated inside an official block on different timings of a usual working day.
Overall, the coffee shop has highest sale in the morning from 7:30 to 10:30 except for sandwiches whereas the lowest sale for all kinds of food and drinks starts from 2:30 to 5:30 with an exception of pastries. The sale for coffee, in overall, is the most popular and the tea is the least popular one.
Starting from the best sale time i.e. the morning section, the coffee shop sells 265 coffee 110 tea, 275 pastries, and 50 sandwiches. It has its second-highest sale in the last section (5:30-8:30) for most of their food and drinks except pastries, which has the lowest sale among the four sections. It is then followed by a period from 10::30 to 2:30, in which sandwiches have its peak sale (200). The least sale for coffee (145), tea (35), and sandwiches (40) occur from 2:30 to 5:30 except for pastries (150).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...orking day. Overall, the coffee shop has highest sale in the morning from 7:30 to 10:30 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then, whereas, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65168539326 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31613345526 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5476126848 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119458982232 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695390599276 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413040274477 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104893870267 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304571576652 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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