In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?
It is believed that interactions between employers and employees are crucial in major companies, whereas the others argued that other different factors deserve more attentions. Although to become successful in businesses requires various factors, I think that communication is needed most.
It is no doubt that face-to-face interactions are essential for establishing relationships between managers and the staff. First off, it is likely to encourage employees to improve their work performance. As an illustration, the members of a company will finish their tasks and work quicker and more effective if they get along well with their boss. Communicating and discussing with who they work for frequently can create a better working environment; hence, their task performance will be improved remarkably.
Not only that, communications are necessary as it can also relieve the workers' stress and anxiety. It is reported that an organization's staff is likely to deal with stress and anxiety due to the amount of work they have to finish and other factors if their manager rarely or never creates an opportunity for talking and communicating in the office. Working in such a dreadful and rigid environment can undoubtedly cause a negative impact on the employees' mental health.
In conclusion, despite the fact that in order to gain success and prosperity in businesses, there are numerous things that need to be taken into account. However, I strongly believe that above all of them, communications and interactions are vital for establishing a better working atmosphere for both the employees and the managers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...re necessary as it can also relieve the workers stress and anxiety. It is reported that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, i think, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4246031746 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13150054549 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5532460718 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15325166152 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589433182105 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597815994015 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108163589669 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800890740221 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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