It is one of the most significant debatable topic nowadays. According to my point of view, no one can replace the heritage value of newspaper and magazine.
On the first hand, most of the evolution country are using traditional methods for reading a newspaper and magazine during, the morning with cup of tea. Eventually, it is one of the most relaxation time. Furthermore, if we highlighted, it has tremendous amount of postive effects. However, newspapers are very cheap option for middle class society instead low class society. Moreover, most of the people have adopted as a profession. For example, Pakistan is the second highest country for publishing the newspapers in huge quantity.
On the other hand, I do not disagree with that, E-books or internet have no valued. It is easy way to gather any sort of data with in a few second.. However, it is irrefutable that most of the data on socail media have incompleted and misrepresented. So, they provide miscommunication, barrier issues and many more. Furthermore, it has very expensive charges, no one can easily afford it.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, newspaper is best option for collect the data and no one can replace it easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dous amount of postive effects. However, newspapers are very cheap option for mid...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...ay to gather any sort of data with in a few second.. However, it is irrefutable that most ...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...er any sort of data with in a few second.. However, it is irrefutable that most of...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...hell, I pen down saying that, newspaper is best option for collect the data and no one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93658536585 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95655635174 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3701013696 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2857142857 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108946761094 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327717625451 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371175201963 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672058318664 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240699981133 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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