Essay topics:
What is the best age to marry?
Marrigening is the most important event that hapend in our lives. someone get married to some reasons. I will discuss some points about wiche age is better for marrieging.
Frist of all, when we decied to be married with someone we think about lots of subjects that help us to life be more better. The main thing is older, because it is very important and we have to think about chid as well as.
In my opinion, age between 30 to 38 is good for marriageing.
As I mentiond above, when we have been over 30 it is more easier that we decide in our lives because we have experince. we know actually what we want to get and enjoy each times in our lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Someone
...portant event that hapend in our lives. someone get married to some reasons. I will dis...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...event that hapend in our lives. someone get married to some reasons. I will discuss...
^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ots of subjects that help us to life be more better. The main thing is older, because it is...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... above, when we have been over 30 it is more easier that we decide in our lives because we ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...in our lives because we have experince. we know actually what we want to get and e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 532.0 1977.66487455 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 125.0 407.700716846 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.256 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 4.48103885553 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25233745251 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 212.727598566 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 618.680645161 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6157190194 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.5 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114639783355 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546340531645 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046293402705 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727787777468 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358902086253 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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