ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:
explain why you are writing
describe your qualifications and experience
explain how they can contact you
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing this letter to apply for a job of Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine teaching professional.
When I learnt about your dynamic need of well-learned Spanish instructor I felt compelled to write you about my interest in job.As an energetic and professional enthusiast with my proven success in teaching Spanish,I'm well prepared to offer my strength and services to your institute. I have done Spanish language course with two years prior experience of teaching Spanish at Modern languages Coaching academy. I would like to tell you that apart from Spanish I'm also good in teaching French, and it would be of great help in translation activity. Besides, I'm an honest and amicable person with well-formed capacity to work. I think I can make a significant impact on your organization in this role.
If you want to inquire more about me you can contact me through this mail: sumayyahawa@gmail.com. I'm also writing my number(0347195525) if need occurs.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
- ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/Madam, Im writing this letter to apply for a job ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the magazine teaching professional. When I learnt about your dynamic need of wel...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...d to write you about my interest in job.As an energetic and professional enthusias...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Im
...th my proven success in teaching Spanish,Im well prepared to offer my strength and ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...h my proven success in teaching Spanish,Im well prepared to offer my strength and ...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ike to tell you that apart from Spanish Im also good in teaching French, and it wo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... help in translation activity. Besides, Im an honest and amicable person with well...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...rough this mail: sumayyahawa@gmail.com. Im also writing my number0347195525 if nee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, may, so, thus, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17714285714 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22138770959 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8946234172 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246247864914 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965966925247 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134841513594 0.0603063233224 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170824432443 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198476841197 0.0580467560999 342% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.