International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
Often we have observed that people loosing trust on foreigners spending leisure time on vacations. Locals are getting more reserved and not willing for reasons involving fear for losing cultural heritage and religious faiths. The key to solve this problem is becoming more open-minded as tourism helps advancement of society. In the essay we will see promoting tourism definitely has positive flux towards overall growth of the county.
Tourism has disadvantages of losing the legacy of a local customs, fear of losing religious importance, possible adverse impact on younger generation due to frequent visitors. For example, Tajmahal in India, categorized as one of the seven wonders of the world, gradually losing its charm due to air pollution.
Tourism plays a major role in building counties economy. Countries like Mauritius, Bhutan’s are couple of counties who majorly rely on this industry. Key aspects comprising good infrastructure, usage of public transports, trekking facilities where possible preserves cultural heritage. For Example, Bhutan being the carbon neutral nation is enjoying the nature beauty. Some of the key government policies include, zero carbon emission, planting trees in abundance, limits on inflow of visitors.
Finally, to conclude, tourism is one of the driving force for country economy. People have to broaden their perspective and welcome outsiders which brings harmony across country which directs to a happy world.
- Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals? 79
- With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How can old people be enco 88
- Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals? 11
- International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? 77
- International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'custom'?
Suggestion: custom
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'counties'' or 'county's'?
Suggestion: counties'; county's
... Tourism plays a major role in building counties economy. Countries like Mauritius, Bhut...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64705882353 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79895618576 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674208144796 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6789527559 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925497988559 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324900099037 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033828637592 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050649271601 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217322314929 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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