IT is better to marry someone who is similar to you , rather than someone who is different from you.
Generally speaking, I believe that it is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you.
First of all, its important to consider the understanding between the two persons. If two person understand each other well, then their is a less chance of having the arguments between them. If some one is similar to you then he/she understand your situation and try to understand your situation. By taking the example of my parents, I like to make this topic more clear. As both of my mom and dad are of similar nature. They understand to each other very well and do not get irritate on the small topics, but even support the other to feel strong.
In addition with the understanding, if you marry a person which have same occupation you have is the better opinion. If both of you have the same occupation then its easier for you to explain your difficulties to each other. As most of the marrige get failed because of the reason that either husband or the wife are of the different occupation. Due to which, they do not understand the difficulties one have to suffer in one's occupation. So, if they are similar in that way, its easier to cooperate. For example, if both the husband and the wife are doctor then its easier for them to cooperate and mange their medical related problems with each other.
On the same way, if your partner is similar with you, their is less chances of getting conflicts in the opinion. As for example, my uncle and aunt are just of opposite nature. As my uncle do like to go outside from the home for holidays but my aunt love to do so. But in the same way my uncle love to eat in the resturants and doing parties but my aunt doesn't to do so. So they are always having arguments on this topic, and both are teasing to each other about their differences.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument's explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it is more beneficial to marry someone who is similar to you.
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Sentence: If two person understand each other well, then their is a less chance of having the arguments between them.
Description: The fragment person understand each is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace understand with verb, past tense
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Refer to their and is
Sentence: If some one is similar to you then he/she understand your situation and try to understand your situation.
Description: The fragment she understand your is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace understand with verb, past tense
Sentence: As most of the marrige get failed because of the reason that either husband or the wife are of the different occupation.
Description: The fragment or the wife is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: For example, if both the husband and the wife are doctor then its easier for them to cooperate and mange their medical related problems with each other.
Description: The fragment and the wife is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: On the same way, if your partner is similar with you, their is less chances of getting conflicts in the opinion.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Refer to their and is
Sentence: As most of the marrige get failed because of the reason that either husband or the wife are of the different occupation.
Error: marrige Suggestion: marriage
Sentence: For example, if both the husband and the wife are doctor then its easier for them to cooperate and mange their medical related problems with each other.
Error: mange Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: But in the same way my uncle love to eat in the resturants and doing parties but my aunt doesn't to do so.
Error: resturants Suggestion: restaurants
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
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No. of Words: 370 350
No. of Characters: 1582 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.534 0.50
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