Nowadays, most large companies operate multinationally. To what
extent those companies should have responsibility towards local
communities in which they operate?
in this time, many demonstrative companies available in a country, and some argument say that the indicative companies in conclusive country should give the function it self. however, it will be discuss in this essay.
regarding the corporates operating multionally is beneficial for societies because it can be useful for enhancing economic growth. Indirectly the teenager dwelling in surrounding the firm will be called in order to give opportunity in any job vacancies which corporate provide. furthermore it is promptly blissful information for the people living there.
it is can be noted from opposing view saying that multinational companies working in certain country never doing corporate social responsibility. Academically, many people sorrow about this. in term of corporate social responsibility the companies should give the function to other for instance giving the practical business wanting to develop the business skill. Therefore many corporate still store their business on its internal factor and avoiding external factor.
to conclude, it seem to me that the companies should give the positive effect to their living arround because it is for keeping the perceiving of civil regarding the multinational companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74731182796 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04394624474 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0101950594 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135078577924 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470606146546 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478017839543 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833941282208 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233271034962 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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