I utterly agree with the concept that teachers should be payed according to their students knowledge. Although students might not be fast learners or might not study at home and their knowledge being the base of the teachers salary might not look rational. But on the other hand, the superior reasons I advocate this ground are the burgeoning function of the teachers, more stimulation for them as well as the benefits this scheme accommodates students with.
First I think that, the scheme of relating the salary of the teachers to students makes the teachers more functional. Some teachers tend to be more inactive in the class and put all the burden of the subjects on students shoulders. For instance, we had this teacher on high-school that had this habit of asking students to teach a lesson every session as their class activitiy credits. The whole term we learnt everything by ourselves and she was just simply leening on her chair the whole time.
Furthermore, if the teachers come to the understanding that their activities in the class are going to be more rewarded they will be more motivated to teach with higher quality. Occasionally we ran into teachers and professors that teach better than others and truly dedicate their time and energy on their students with the sole purpose of rearing better students for future generation of the engineers, scientists and even government men. Asking from me, I strongly advocate the fact that these people deserve to be payed more and money is the only thing we can offer for them in trade with their precious time and life.
At last, in every scheme about the quality of the educarional services students should on the spot light. This project is not only beneficial for the educational system and the teachers but also most of all it is advantagous for the pupils. This way students get to learn everthitng in the school and the university. Additionally, these days that the parents are spending more and more time on their childrens' education would be more relieved and reassured that their children are getting the best education and are taken good care of them.
In conclusion, most of the rising worries about the reduction of efficacious studing by youngsters can be solved just by putting this scheme into effect. This project will be lucrative to educational system, teachers and the students and their famillies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94014962594 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60511983155 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498753117207 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3924019967 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8125 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222271517739 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901667951685 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694871457302 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139322952775 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512219037509 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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