Due to modernisation the eating habit of people are changed. This includes the availability of multiple tables needed to survive. I accord with this notion but not entirely and my views are underpinned below.
According to the first school of thought, the balance diet is easy to swallow and it take less time for digestion. Healthy food stuffs help to maintain our internal body parts such as blood circular, lungs, Kidneys and many more. Moreover, balanced eatables is disease free and pure which is protect the human being from diseases. For instance in a recent survey declared the 30% of patient become healthy in one month due to taking a healthy diet.
Acording to the second School aspect, the balance diet is good way to stay healthy in life but, masses should not neglect the physical activities like jogging, yoga, gyming and others outdoor games. This type of activities also help the dwellers to stay fit and healthy. Additionally, healthy cuisines are very expensive so middle class people cannot afford balanced diet.
To be brief, people should consume healthy food stuffs in their daily routine because human health is depend on what they eat. So masses should aware for their eating factors.
- Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree? 56
- Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle, others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- The diagram describes the production of canned fruit. 56
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: takes
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Suggestion: protected
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Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00495049505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38069404726 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3111348769 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232012287135 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730023714609 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544384057714 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120078640059 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543391762135 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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