There are handfuls of elements which characterize who we are, and what we will be becoming in the future and belief is one of the most important of these fundamental characteristics. We all respond and act, on/against the basis of what we believe hence I agree with the author that it is harmful to compromise our belief and should stick to our values/belief.
Firstly, Beliefs controls our actions: it helps us decide wrong and right. For example, It is our belief that no innocent human life should be destroyed and on this basis, our fundamental constitutions were carefully developed and our courts decree guilty or not guilty for such actions. It is our belief that, every human being has certain rights such as freedom of expression, right to vote, right to eat, etc.(depending on country's constitution).Another example, Hitler believed that a jew was bad blood and polluted their country which caused the genesis of the holocaust.
Secondly, Beliefs defines our characters: It allows one's character development and prioritizes what is important and what is not. It also allows another human being to recognize that what kind of person he/she is dealing with. For example, We would never like someone to hold office of decision making if he/she believes that women are inferior to men.
For example, one can decide(along with other factors) that if they want to marry someone or not, on the basis of belief that having a casual sexual relationship outside of marriage is okay.
However, few can argue that sometimes we do compromise our beliefs to save something for greater good. For example, one may believe that "I should not lie". Despite this, people do lie to achieve/protect something. I remember, 3 years back, one of our associate swiped the attendance for somebody else and got caught. The office decided to fire but before that asked to testify everyone on the floor if he has done this before or not. Everyone lied and said "this was the first time" to save this person because we all knew that if he is fired for this crime then he will not get another chance to find a job in another office hence I beg to differ on this position and i believe that one should not have to be in such position. I would also like to add that, if somebody's life or career can be saved by not disclosing the true information then one should not disclose the true information, because our beliefs have priorities some beliefs are more important than other beliefs. Also, I can argue that we should not even have to keep such beliefs at first place.
Conclusively, we can say that one should not compromise his/her beliefs and should continue to hold such the values. However if some beliefs which I would like to add, are not necessity(one would like to have.) then compromising on such beliefs to save something greater is always a good choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 33.0505617978 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83943089431 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74420278392 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5704373327 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.05 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146363820047 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520375927074 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306810634833 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849940069627 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271981300834 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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