NEWS MEDIA IS MORE INFLUENTAL NOWADAYS AND SOME PEOPLE THINK IT IS NEGATIV DEVELOPMENT.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE ?
This era, news media gives information to people by television, radio or internet about anything happen in this world, but some people think that news media can give negative influential and negative development for people. From the statement, I think that I disagree with the statement and I will give reasons and examples to support my opinion.
It is true that news media influential, some people think that it is negative development because news media can bring negative impact if they give not real information. Some people think that news media can bring negative influence and make some people do not believe news media again. It is the reason why some people think news media bring negative influence and negative impact to some people.
Most of news media give information that real happen. Actually news media can help some people to know about anything in this world and news media will bring positive impact to some people. News media can give information about education, economic, criminal and politic does it bring positive influence and positive impact to them.
In my conclusion, some people think that news media influential some people about news media can bring negative impact because they sometimes give not real information but I think that most of news media give the real information and can bring positive impact and positive influence to society. I believe news media can give good influence and give much knowledge to society.
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Sentence: This era, news media gives information to people by television, radio or internet about anything happen in this world, but some people think that news media can give negative influential and negative development for people.
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Sentence: In my conclusion, some people think that news media influential some people about news media can bring negative impact because they sometimes give not real information but I think that most of news media give the real information and can bring positive impact and positive influence to society.
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