Topic 2: Explain the process of finding a volunteer work.
With the busy life, it is hard for people to take part in volunteer activities. However, the benefits of volunteering to ourselves, our family and even the community can not be denied. Thus, for success in finding a suitable volunteer work, you should follow these fundamental instructions.
To begin with, you should identify the type of volunteer work that you are really passionate about. In deed, choosing the suitable job generates the motivation for you to work more creatively and optimize productivity. In addition, it also helps you cope with the high pressure in work environment. After that, determine what skills that you would like to gain and develop. For instance, if you volunteer to teach children or adults how to read and write, this experience will help you prepare for your job in education. An another example is that if you serve as a treasurer of an organization, you will acquire the knowledge more about banking, which is helpful for you career path in the future.
Next, effective time management skills is necessary for you so that the volunteer job would not influence on your own life. Ensure you are able to balance your volunteer work with your study. For example, if you have a heavy schedule at school, you should refuse to join the social activities at the same time, or you can find the other ones which do not take much time to do because your study is the most important. Simultaneously, take the place you want to work as a volunteer into consideration, make sure your work place does not take you a lot of time to commute.
Finally, you should search for your volunteer work through organizations. If you are a student, your own school is the ideal place for you to start a volunteer work. Ask your teacher or visit counselor about any opportunities, they might be able to direct you towards. Meanwhile, there are a lot of local service organizations that give you opportunities to find a better job. Through these websites, you can send the message directly to the hirer. After that, they will arrange an interview about your personality and your strength that are qualified for the job.
On the whole, if you follow these steps, you will have an ideal volunteer work easily. It takes only few minutes to determine the work, arrange a scheme and find the organization, you will have the opportunities to experience and be mature. Ensure that you will persist with the job, put your enthusiasm in it and try to learn new things. One day, you will receive the great result.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an example' or 'another example'.
Suggestion: An example; Another example
... you prepare for your job in education. An another example is that if you serve as a treasurer of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, really, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81880733945 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71790732778 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488532110092 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8932412751 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.347826087 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148927978345 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687795066666 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597093799098 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121851639705 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040700411513 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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