WRITING
TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this
You work for an interactional company, You have see an advertisement for a training course which will be useful
Write a letter to your manager li yor Tetter
• Describe the training course you want to do
• Explain what the company could do to help you
• Say how the course will the useful for your job
Write at least 150 words
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Mr John,
I am writing to you with respect to a training course advertised recently which will enhance the result desired for the on-going research. The training is about Mathematica software.
With respect to the present research output, Mathematica software is a tool that has been upgraded and however, it is very imperative that I attend the training for better comprehension and also to be well equipped.
However, the mathematica software would enhance the company’s biomath result in understanding the analysis of the model been under studied. This would not only give analysis but also present a pictoral representation of interaction between the two species. Although, previous software been used gives 2D presentation, however Mathematica software obtains 4D representation with numerical evaluation as it’s uniqueness.
I would be grateful if the company could help out with registration fee and flight fair. This would ease the responsibility as other things such as substience would be responsible for by me.
I look forward to a favourable response.
Yours faithfully
Adeniji Adejimi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-24 | gracespeakss | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...will enhance the result desired for the on-going research. The training is about Mathema...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67647058824 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21986158872 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6722636976 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143999502068 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579400182235 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682014220034 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850959013767 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101053126465 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.